假如你是李华，在美国留学。你母亲今天下午要从国内来看你，但你凑巧要去做个讲座，故给你的朋友Peter留下字条请他下午三点半去机场接你母亲。因Peter未见过你母亲，请根据下表在字条中描述你母亲的特征以..域名：学优高考网，每年帮助百万名学子考取名校！问题人评价，难度：0%假如你是李华，在美国留学。你母亲今天下午要从国内来看你，但你凑巧要去做个讲座，故给你的朋友Peter留下字条请他下午三点半去机场接你母亲。因Peter未见过你母亲，请根据下表在字条中描述你母亲的特征以便他辨认。写作要求：1．必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容； 2．词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 评分标准：句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。 SundayPeter, I am very glad that my mother is coming this afternoon by air.
   
I will be grateful to you for your help.　　 Yours,LiHua 马上分享给朋友：答案SundayPeter, 　　I am very glad that my mother is coming this afternoon by air. But I have to give a lecture and have no time to meet her. I am writing to ask you to meet my mother at the airport at 3:30 for me. As you have never seen her before, I will say something about her to help you recognize her. She is around sixty years old, fat and short, with a long face and gray hair. I have been told she is dressed in a white blouse and brown trousers and she will take a yellow suitcase with her. 　　I will be grateful to you for your help. gkstk　　 Yours,LiHua 点击查看答案解释本题暂无同学作出解析，期待您来作答点击查看解释相关试题欢迎来到橡皮网
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