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2015年高考英语作文之饼状图-四个句型表达占的比例_英语名师工作室_新浪博客
2015年高考英语作文之饼状图-四个句型表达占的比例
五个句型表达:占38.9%的人用公共交通出行
1.38.9% of the people preferred to use public
transportation.
2.There is 38.9% of the people preferring to use public
transportation.
3.The percentage of the people preferring to use public
transportation is about 38.9%.
4.The people preferring to use public transportation accounts
for 38.9% of all.
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1.2010年高三一模——崇文60
第一节 情景作文(20分)
某中学生英语报开展征文活动,主题为“2009年北京的交通状况”。下面的图表是2009年北京交通出行结构示意图。请结合图表内容,用英语写一篇简要的报告,并就某个数据说说你的观点,参加征文活动。词数不少于60。​
1.图表中五种交通方式及所占比例
2.图表中一个数据反映的情况
3.自己的一个看法
The chart shows the percentage of the different means of
transportation people used in Beijing in % of the people
preferred to use public transportation, such as buses, or
subways.At the same time, There is 38.9% of the people driving
cars, which shows the increasing tendency of private cars.The
percentage of the people who travel by bike is about 18.1% , while
7.1% of the people took taxis, and 1.9% tried other means of
transportation.
From the data showed above, more than one third of the citizens
are in favor of public transportation.In my opinion, people should
be encouraged to use buses or subways, as it can reduce pollution
and relieve traffic jams.Besides, it is very economical and
convenient.
One possible version:
The chart shows the percentage of the different means of
transportation people used in Beijing in % of the people
preferred to use public transportation, such as buses, or
subways.At the same time, the people who drove made up 34% of the
total, which shows the increasing tendency of private cars.The
result also shows only 18.1% of the people traveled by bike, while
7.1% of the people took taxis, and 1.9% tried other means of
transportation.
From the data showed above, more than one third of the citizens
are in favor of public transportation.In my opinion, people should
be encouraged to use buses or subways, as it can reduce pollution
and relieve traffic jams.Besides, it is very economical and
convenient.
2.2011年高三二模——西城50
第一节 情景作文(20分)
假设你是红星中学高中学生李华,最近,你校学生会对影响学生课外阅读的因素进行了调查,结果见下图。请根据图示提供的信息给某英文报纸写信,反映调查的实际情况,并寻求建议。
1. 信的开头已为你写好。
2. 词数不少于60。
Dear Editor,
Our student union has recently conducted a survey on what may
affect students' outside-class reading. The result is as
72% of the students think that school work takes up most of
their day, leaving very little time for outside-class reading.
Meanwhile, 16% complain that their parents do not support them
enough. Parents are concerned that their children's attention may
be taken away by the non-school related reading.
Besides, 8% of the students are not satisfied with the opening
hours of the library and limited book collections there. And 4% of
the students think books are too expensive nowadays, so they can't
afford to read as much as they want.
We all know that reading is beneficial. However, given the facts
above, how can we read more? I would very much appreciate your
advice on how to encourage our reading.
Sincerely yours,
3.2011年高三上学期期末——海淀38
第一节 情景作文(20分)
最近,你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查,结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇短文,
介绍调查结果,并根据其中两个数据谈论自己的看法。
1. 短文的开头已为你写好。
2. 词数不少于60。
Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted
among senior three students. The results are as follows:
Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted
among senior three students.The results are as follows:
more than half of the students, about 54% usually put their math
homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the
most important. Meanwhile, English is regarded as most significant
by 18% of the participants, and the other subjects attract the
attention of 21% of the students.
There is a profound difference between math and Chinese. Without
doubt, some students hold the view that math is most interesting
and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense of
achievement in it. However, each subject has its unique charm and
they are of the same value. Therefore, I think we should take every
subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.
4.2012年高三上学期期末——海淀21
第一节 情景作文(20分)
近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查,结果见下图。请根据图示用英语写一篇短文,介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法,供有关部门参考。词数不少于60。
注意: 1. 文章的开头已经给出。
2. 提示词:报废车abandoned vehicles
Recently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a
____________________________________________________________
Recently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a
website. As can be seen from the pie chart, only 36.13% of them are
not clear about it. Of those who show their disbelief, 35.29% are
afraid of abandoned vehicles being used and 24.37% worry that
school buses are often overloaded, which can cause serious traffic
accidents. About 21.35% of them worry that the school buses are not
equipped with safety equipment like safety belts. Another 18.49%
blame drivers for breaking the speed limit.
I think effective measures should be taken to ensure the safety
of students. More money should be invested to improve the quality
of school buses. Meanwhile, all the school buses should be examined
regularly.
5.2013年高三上学期期末——海淀4
第一节 情景作文(20分)
某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查,结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因,并针对图表2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。词数不少于600
注意:文章的开头已经给出。
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on
the Internet.
__________________________________________________________________
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on
the Internet. The results are as follows.
Chart 1 shows the reasons why people choose to shop online. Of
all the people surveyed, 49% think that there are many varieties of
products in online shops. About one third of them say that
reasonable price is the most appealing factor. And25% hold that
online shopping is so convenient that consumers can buy what they
want anywhere at any time. Interestingly, 5% of the people even
mention that they can make new friends through online shopping.
However, many consumers also express their concerns about online
shopping. Among all the concerns in Chart 2, the quality of the
products, which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention.
Personally, I agree that what consumers get from online shops
sometimes differs from what can be seen in the pictures, which can
be very disappointing. Therefore, we should make sure the product
is of good quality before making a purchase.
6.2010年高三一模——海淀63
第一节 情景作文(20分)
最近,你校学生会对分类垃圾箱是否进教室一事进行了调查,调查结果见下表。请根据图表提供的信息用英语写一篇短文,介绍同学们的不同意见和看法,并表达你自己的观点。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:饼状图pie chart
学生对分类垃圾箱进教室的不同看法及所占比例
2.肯定看法
3.否定看法
4.个人观点
One possible version:
Recently the student union conducted a survey on whether
recycling dustbins should be set in classrooms.
As can be seen from the pie chart, different students hold
different opinions on this program. Only a few students care little
about it. Surprisingly, about one third of students are totally
against the program. They don’t bother to change their old habits.
However, over half the students are completely for the program, as
it is not only beneficial to recycling of resources, but also it
can help students develop their good habits of garbage
classification. Besides, 12% of the students partly agree. They
hold the opinion that educating people on how to classify the
garbage goes first.
Personally, I’m in favor of this program. I believe it’s
important to raise people’s awareness of garbage classification,
from which we will get considerable benefits for the future.
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  This is a pie chart that shows the proportion of the meal sold in a supermarket. The total meat sold in the supermarket is classified into six types as follows: chicken, pork, beef, lamb, fish and others.
  Overall, chicken has the largest proportion, which accounts for 40%; while others has the smallest percentage, at 2%.
  As can be seen in the pie chart, chicken, which makes up 40%, is the most popular among the total meat sold, then next is pork with 20%, followed by beef, constituting 18%; and finally come lamb, fish and others at 15%, 5% and 2% respectively, It should be noted that the sale of pork is half as much as that of chicken. And it is also interesting to note that the sale of chicken is 20 times as much as that of others.
  It can be concluded from the pie chart that chicken is most commonly bought meat while others is the least commonly bought meat.
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图表作文的概念:
就是用文字结合表格、数字或图画作为写作信息提示的一种写作形式。图表作文的分类:
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饼状图形的描述
对于百分比进行描述所使用的句型:
&& % the && is/has/have/are &&
&& accounts for &&% of the total
&& takes up &&% in the whole chart
趋势的比较
1. 表示相似的句型 (实例) :
Both share prices rose sharply in January.
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the && doubled/tripled in && compared with those in &&
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&& is && in contrast to &&
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1. 表示不足的词或词组: nearly
2. 表示超过的词或词组: just over
3. 表示大约的词:about
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