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Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages. First of all, a child feels well about saving an unwanted animal and gives it whole new life. Second ,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of a child had to feed, clean up, and exercise the pet. What's more, you only pay a few dollars for a pet there while at pet store you may spend hundred of dollars. Another advantage is what pets like dogs and cats can bring lots of happiness for a family. We can be excellent company for a person who live alone or has lost a loved one.So please take a pet home,
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Taking 后面加上away 表示‘带走’， gives ---改成giving 和saving 并列做介宾；because of去掉of，因为because of后面不能接句子，只能接名词和名词短语；a child had to feed,把had 改成has，因为全文用的都是现在时；at pet store在at后面加a，因为store是可数名词；hundred 要加上s，数目不确定时用Another advantage is what把what 改成 live 要加s,第三人称单数；
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Taking a pet from Animal Rescue Center has some advantages. First of all, a child feels
well（well改为good) about saving an unwanted animal and gives(gives 改成giving)
it (此处加a）whole（whole改为wholly) new life. Second ,having a pet also provides an opportunity for children's growth because of（去掉of） a child had(had改为has) to feed, clean up, and exercise the pet. What's more, you only pay a few dollars for a pet there while at (此处加a）pet store you may spend hundred（hundred改为hundreds)of dollars. Another advantage is what(what改为that) pets like dogs and cats can bring lots of happiness for a family. We(We改为They) can be excellent company...
have和has的主语一般是人比较多，这里动名词作has的主语感觉会有点不协调，可以改成it&will&take&some&advantages&to&take&a&pet&from&Animal&Rescue&Cnter.feel&well也有点问题。well如果作为形容词的话多数用来表示身体健康状况良好，而不会只心理上的良好，可以把well改成good。Second&,having&a&pet&also&provides&an&opportunity&for&children's&growth&because&of&a&child&had&to&feed中用because而不用加of，had&to用has&to&就可以。Second,&having&a&pet&also&provides&a&good&opportunity&for&children's&growth&because&he&has&to&feed,&clean&up&and&train&the&pet.我不知道你的exercise是想表达什么意思，我这里就改成train了。what's&more,&you&will&only。。。这里用一般将来时会比较好一点。但是，这整个一句句子有点表达不清，如果LZ不介意的话，可以跟我探讨探讨。此外，at&a&pet&store,记得在可数名词前加冠词或在后加s。另外，hundred这个词，要么数词+hundred+n.，要么hundreds&of+n.，所以这里改成hundreds可能会好一点。&Another&advantage&is&what&pets...把what改成that，因为引导的是表语从句。bring&sth.&to&sb.，所以for&a&family可以改成to&a&family。当然，for也不算很错，for也算吧百搭，但是to用得顺一点。We&can&be&excellent&company...和前面一样的问题，记得要在company前面加a。...a&person&who&live...记得在live后加s,因为先行词是a&person，注意第三人称单数。
倒数第二句We can be excellent company for a person who live alone or has lost a loved one.主语应该是It，从句 who lives alone。
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