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第1篇 基础写作
你校学生会就高三每周一次各科的测试的做法进行意见调查,结果有八成学生反对,以下是调查的结果:
反对的原因:
1)占用太多有限的学习时间
2)改卷费时
3)学生有厌烦情绪
1)每月一次综合测试
2)堂上小测,自由讨论
【写作内容】
你是高三学生李华,请根据以上调查结果向你校英语报“给校长的一封信”栏目投稿,表达你希望学校取消周考的愿望,内容包括:
1) 调查的结果;
2) 反对的原因;
3) 你的建议
【写作要求】
只能用5个句子表达所给的全部内容。信的开头与结尾已给出。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Dear Headmaster,
I'm writing to suggest that the weekly tests be cancelled.
Thank you for considering my request. I'm looking forward to
hearing your
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
Yours sincerely,
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
Dear Headmaster,
& I'm writing to suggest that the weekly
tests be cancelled.& According to
a& survey we made recently, 80% of the
students are against /oppose / be opposed
to /object to the practice of
weekly tests for three main reasons.
&&&&&&First,
the weekly tests take up so much of the limited time we have.
Second, the weekly tests take our teachers lots of time to grade
and make them very tired. The most important thing of all is that
students grow tired of such tests. I suggest that the school
consider only giving us tests every month and allow us to
have& free discussions in class.
Thank you for considering my request. I'm looking forward to
hearing your
response.&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&Yours
sincerely,
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
第2篇读写任务&&&
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Once a young man was in love with a girl and folded 1,000 paper
cranes for her. Although his
future didn't seem bright, they were very happy together. But one
day, his girlfriend told him she was going to Paris and would never
come back. Heartbroken, the young man started working even harder,
trying to make something out of himself. Finally he set up his own
One rainy day, while the young man was driving, he saw his
ex-girlfriend's parents. Eager to show them his luxury car, he
drove slowly beside them. To his amazement, the couple were walking
towards a cemetery /tomb(墓地). He got out and followed them. There
he saw his ex-girlfriend --- a photograph of her smiling at him
from her tombstone, and those precious paper cranes in a glass
bottle! He walked over and asked the couple what had happened. They
explained that she didn't actually leave but she had contracted
cancer. She had believed that he would succeed someday, but didn't
want her illness to be his barrier. She asked her parents to put his
paper cranes beside her, because, if the day came when fate brought
him to her again, he could take them back with him. The young man
wept regretfully.
(sob,cry)&&&&&&
阅读以上故事,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
1.以约30 个词概括这个故事的主要内容;
2.以约120个词就“一个感人的故事”为题进行写作,包括以下内容:
(1)你读完上述故事的感受;
(2)你曾读过的另一个感人的故事;
(3)你从该故事中悟出的道理。
第2篇读写任务
The story is about a girl, who chose to leave her boyfriend and
faced cancer alone, in order not to affect her boyfriend's future.
When the successful young man learnt the truth, he was
broken-hearted.
&&&&&&&&(1)你读完上述故事的感受;
&&&&&After
reading the story I can't help beginning to
think&more. I am deeply moved by the
girl in the
(2)你曾读过的另一个感人的故事;
There is no doubt that in life there are many such touching
stories.&&I once
read a story about a husband who loved his wife very much. The wife
always complained that he earned so little and was useless. But
when the wife became seriously ill and needed
a&kidney transplant, the husband chose to
give his&kidney to her. When the wife woke
up after the operation, she was happy to find that felt very well
and she could say good-bye to death. But when she asked where her
husband was, the nurse gave her the letter from her husband, which
says, “My dear, I'm sorry I could only give one of
my&kidneys to you.
If& I could , I would give both of them to
you. Please live happily for both of us.”
&&&&(3)你从该故事中悟出的道理。&
From these stories, we can learn that it's important to
cherish those who love us and return our love to them. Or we'll
regret it when we eventually lose them.
第3篇 读写任务
In the story, a girl who suffered from cancer chose to leave her
boyfriend rather than told him the truth. However, her boyfriend
succeeded in setting up his own business, but later when he
discovered the truth ,he& felt
regretful.
(1)你读完上述故事的感受;&&&&
After reading the story, I was deeply moved by the girl's great
love. She was so selfless that she was willing to sacrifice
herself rather than be the barrier in his way to success.
&&&&&&&(2)你曾读过的另一个感人的故事;
&& This story reminds
me of another moving story I read. An eight-year-old child
heard her parents talking about her little
brother.& All she knew was that he was very
sick and that they had no money left. Without hesitation, the
little girl took out her piggy bank and made her way to a local
drugstore with the hope of buying a miracle to help her brother
recover from his illness. By coincidence, she met a surgeon who was
greatly moved by the girls’ love for her brother and later
successfully operated on her brother&and
saved his life.
(3)你从该故事中悟出的道理。
From the story, I realize that real love means not only pleasure,
but also obligation. By giving love to others, we draw courage,
confidence and happiness from it. I do believe with love, we can
make a real difference and change everything. If we all can treat
people around us with love, the society will live in
实用句型短语整理:
&suffer from
chose to leave her boyfriend rather than
told him the truth.
succeed in setting up his own
After reading the story, I was deeply moved
by&what the girl
&She was willing to sacrifice
&This story reminds me of another
moving story .
without hesitation
make her way to
&recover from his
by coincidence
operate on&
we draw/get courage, confidence and happiness
from .....
The society will live in
范文第4-1篇----基础写作(第二次摸底测试)
&&&&&&假如你是John.在三鹿毒奶粉事件后在学校3000名学生中进行“每天你还喝牛奶吗”的调查活动。调查结果如下:
每天你还喝牛奶吗?&&
由&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
喝&55%&&&&&
绝大部分牛奶质量可靠;牛奶可增强体质&&&&不喝&32%&&&&对牛奶.尤其是国产牛奶失去信心;害怕得病
不确定&13%&&等待质量检测结果再定&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
&[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的写作内容;
三鹿毒奶粉: the Sanlu contaminated milk
范文第4-1篇
&After the Sanlu
contaminated milk powder issue broke out, in our school we carried
out& a survey& among the 3, 000
students on whether they still drink milk .&
According to the results, we find that 55 % of the students who
participated in the survey give a positive answer that they will
keep drinking milk,& for they believe that
most& milk products
are reliable.& Besides, they think milk powder can
help people strengthen their
body.& Meanwhile,
about one third of them express their doubts and refuse to drink
milk any more in the future because they lack confidence in milk ,
doubt the quality of milk,
and& fear they may get
ill. The 13 percent say that they won't make a decision before the
final results of the quality test are published
made/given.&&
范文第4-2篇&
(第二次摸底测试)
&After the Sanlu contaminated
milk powder news was released/reported, we made a survey among the
3, 000 students in our school on whether they still drink milk
.& The results show
that 55 % of the
students& believe that
most& milk products
are still good and can
help&&build
up people's strength / health . Meanwhile, about one third of the
students say& they
won't drink milk any
in& future. They argue
that they lose confidence in milk and they are afraid of getting
ill after drinking such
milk.& The 13% express
that they won't make a decision until they see the final results of
the quality
&范文第4-3篇&
(第二次摸底测试)
&Last week,
we&did &a survey among the 3, 000
students in our school on whether they still drink milk .The
results show us that 55 % of the
students& believe that
most& milk products
are still good and can help people strengthen their body.
Meanwhile, there are about one third of the students who
say& they won't drink
milk any more&
in& future. They don't
believe in milk produced by the home companies like Sanlu and they
are afraid that the milk will do harm to health. Only 13% of the
students express that only when they see the final results of the
quality test will
they& make a decision
whether or not to continue drinking milk powder produced by the
companies.&
on/at&/in&weekend&的用法辨析&&
&读写任务 (第二次摸底测试)
&阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
  When you ask
people what it means to relax, most will answer that relaxing is
something you plan to do later - you do it on vacation, when you
retire, or when you get everything done. This means, of course,
that most other time (95% of your life)should be spend
restless,& rushed, and
mad.& Could this
explain why so many of us operate as if life were one great big
emergency? Most of us put off relaxation until our “in-basket” is
empty. Of course, it never is.
It is useful to think of relaxation as a quality of heart that you
can own on a regular basis rather than something reserved for some
later time. You can relax now. It's helpful to remember that
relaxed people can still be super achievers and, in fact, that
relaxation and creativity go hand in hand. When I'm feeling tired,
for example, I don’t even try to write. But when I feel relaxed, my
writing flows quickly and easily.
Being more relaxed includes training yourself to react differently
to the drama of life. It comes, in part, from reminding yourself
over and over again(with loving kindness and patience)that you have
a choice in how you respond to life. You can learn to relate to
your thinking as well as your situation in new ways.
[写作内容]  
1. 概括短文的内容要点,该部分大约30词。
2. 就“中学生的周末该不该休闲、放松一些”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分大约120词。
1)就你所在学校周末的上课情况作简单的介绍;
2)同学们对学校的这种做法的看法。
3)老师和家长对你校周末上课情况的看法;
4)你持什么态度
范文第5篇&&读写任务(第二次摸底测试)
The author thinks relaxation plays an important part in life, and
people feeling relaxed can easily do better in work or study,
compared with the tired people.
most& pay little
attention to it, and&
only after getting everything done do they consder taking a
rest.(W:46)
1)就你所在学校周末的上课情况作简单的介绍;&
In my school, students are required to go to school on Saturdays,
especially the students of Grade 9
and& Grade 12.
Although most of them are not interested in having classes on
Saturdays / 0n weekends, they have to go to school in order not to
fall behind in class.
2)同学们对学校的这种做法的看法。
Students have their own different opinions on having classes on
Saturdays. Some students think that taking classes on
Saturdays& makes them
much tired and bored, so they want achool to leave them more time
to do their own things on weekends. However, others hold the
opposite opinion. As the students of Senior Three, they believe
they should make full use of every minute to prepare for the
entrance examinations.
3)老师和家长对你校周末上课情况的看法;&
Most of the teachers and parents are for the idea that students
should have classes on Saturdays. They hope that the students can
learn more by having classes on Saturdays. Some of the parents are
worried that if their children don't need to have classes on
Saturdays, they will spend most of their time playing computer
games or doing other useless things, which are not good for
4)你持什么态度。
As far as I’m concerned, no matter how busy we are, we should have
suitable relaxation.&
We can& take some
exercise on the Saturday afternoon, or take part in some
after-school
activities.&&
What's more, having suitable relaxation can help us prepare better
for the following week's
work.& In a
word,& I think
students should have suitable relaxation on
Saturdays.
范文第6篇&
第2期A版&&
Lion dance is a traditional Chinese folk art, which is performed
across China to celebrate festivals or ceremonies. It is usually
performed by two performers. One of the performers plays the lion's
head while the other plays the lion's body and tail. During the
performance, the performers imitate all kinds of movements of lions
to the rhythm of gongs and drums.& With the
immigration of Chinese people, this art form has&
spread all over the world, and it is especially popular in
Southeast Asia.
Clifford Hotel, a 4-star international hotel, which was invested by
Clifford Group and completed on November 25th, 2000,
&is located on the beautiful bank of the Pearl
范文第7篇&&
In the passage, the writer mainly tells us that researchers have
found that giving up smoking can greatly reduce people’s risk of
dying from illness, so it’s never too late to give up
The passage reminds me&that&quite
a lot of &people around me are still addicted to
smoking. What's worse, some teenagers around me also
& It's obvious that smoking can cause great damage
to teenagers. For example, last year one of my classmates began
smoking out of curiosity. Later, he became addicted to it and his
health was negatively affected by that. Worse still, sometimes he
would feel eager to smoke during class, which made him unable to
focus on his study. As a result, he failed to pass
&& Therefore, it's of great
importance for teenagers to give up smoking for our health and
study. It's also important for schools to take proper measures to
forbid young students to get into the bad habit&of
范文第8篇& 基础写作 第一次月考
Dear students,
&& Thank you for
your trust. I am glad to answer your questions.
In order to raise your learning efficiency, you should ask for
advice from the teachers and master the learning skills of each
subject. When doing homework, you can first finish the exercises
that are less difficult. When it comes to making good use of the
weekends, you are supposed to develop professional skills and
participate in more social activities. As for how to better
communicate with your parents, it is suggested that you use more
chances to talk with them and share with them you joy and sorrow.
If you quarrel with your classmates, the best solution is to calm
yourself down first then try to be considerate and solve the
problem positively.
&&& I hope my
suggestions will be helpful for you.
范文第9篇 读写任务 第一次月考
&& “It is high time someone
explained to you about good manners. Yours are obvious by their
absence and I feel sorry for you.”
were the words that Carolyn Bourne e-mailed to her son’s fianc&e
(未婚妻), Heidi Withers. The couple had just visited the Bourne family
home in England.
&& Within days, the
e-mail was all over the Internet, and the subject of manners hit UK
national news.
&& Heidi, Mrs
Bourne said, stayed in bed too late. She told rude jokes. Finally,
she had never thanked Mrs.Bourne for the weekend.
&&& But it
wasn't just Heidi's behavior that got people
talking.& Facebook groups started up
about& the e-mail. The one with the most
members was called "Carolyn Bourne needs to learn some
&People said Mrs.Bourne had been too
direct. They thought she had been cruel when she told Heidi to go
to finishing school—a centre where badly-behaved young women used
to be sent. Everyone agreed there are rules of “good” and “bad”
behavior. Everyone agreed that these rules had been broken. However
,no one could agree what these rules were.(1)
你认为礼貌有什么作用;
(2)以你或你朋友的经历说明礼貌的重要性;
(3)在礼貌方面,中学生特别需要注意什么。
范文第9篇 读写任务 第一次月考
An email, sent by Carolyn Bourne to her son's fianc&e Heidi,
complained that Heidi was rude and impolite. It was spread all over
the Internet. People all agree that one should be polite, but no
one can give a definition of what is politeness.
你认为礼貌有什么作用;
As far as I’m concerned, politeness plays a very important role in
our daily life. Good manners have a great influence on
(2)以你或你朋友的经历说明礼貌的重要性;
&When it comes to the importance of
politeness, I remember my best friend, David. When he came to our
school the year before last, he was unpopular at first
because he was a little shy. However, he is very polite and
is aways ready to help others. At the same time, whenever anyone
helped him, he would writea thank-you card to him. Gradually,
everyone is moved by his friendliness and
politeness.Now David is the
most popular one in our class.
(3)在礼貌方面,中学生特别需要注意什么。
12&students, we should pay more attention
to our manners in order to be a polite person. When we meet our
teachers, we should greet them politely. When we accept help from
others, we should say thanks.
第10篇范文&&
如何拓展句子
自己模仿设计中文语境,再翻译:
& 基础写作限时练习
1.Clifford Hotel:由Clifford
Group建于日建成,是一家具有国际水平的四星级酒店;
2.占地面积:2800平方米;&
建筑面积:10000平方米;&&
投资总额:9000万人民币;
3.位置与交通:坐落于秀丽的珠江河畔;步行仅15分钟可到达"汉溪长隆"地铁站;距广州市中心仅20分钟车程;
4.客房情况:180间客房,明亮舒适;大小会议室共有8间;
5.餐饮方面:中华餐厅能同时容纳400多人用餐,中西美食应有尽有。&
(& 投资: invest )
[写作内容]
&[写作要求]
&必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容;
将5个句子组织成连贯的短文,使用必要的连接词
&Clifford Hotel, a
4-star international hotel,& completed on November
25th, 2000, whose investor
is&Clifford Group, is located on
the beautiful bank of the Pearl River.& The
transportation is so convenient that it only takes
you about 15 minutes to&walk to the Metro Station,
Hanxi Changlong, and 20 minutes' drive to the center of
Guangzhou.
The hotel that was invested with up to 90 million RMB covers
an area of 2800 square metres, owns more than eight meeting rooms
of different size, and has the building area of 10000 square
metres. Besides, it possesses 180 various kinds of bright and
comfortable guest rooms. As for food, the Chinese Restaurant, which
holds at the same time over 400 people, serves all kinds of foods
of Chinese and Western styles.
写作技巧:
句型提炼:
& 1.is located on
Clifford Hotel is located on the beautiful bank of the Pearl
River.祈福酒店坐落于秀丽的珠江河畔.
The new building will be located in the center of
town.这座大楼将建在市中心。
Their factory is located at the foot of the
mountain.他们的工厂坐落在山脚下。
completed 完成/完工
&& The hotel
was completed on November 25th, 2000
work is not completed
yet.这个工作还未完成。
&& When will work on
the highway be completed?高速公路什么时候能完工?
convenient 方便
The transportation is so
convenient.交通很便利。
Our house is convenient for the
shops.我们家到商店很方便。
It will be convenient for&me to go on
foot?我步行去方便。
4.so&+adj that
太...以至于...
The transportation is so convenient that it only takes you about 10
minutes’ walk to the Metro Station and 20 minutes’ drive to the
center of Guangzhou.
It is so quiet in the room that you can hear the drop of a
pin.房间里静得连(地上)掉根针都能听见。
I was&so angry that I&wanted to
hit him .我十分生气, 简直想揍他。
5.It takes/took sb. time to do
It only takes you about 15 minutes’ walk to the Metro
sth.covers
...占地....&
&& The hotel
covers an area of 2800 square metres.
a farm covering more than 100
acres.延伸100公亩的农场
His studies covered a wide
field.他的知识渊博。
Lies cannot cover up facts.谎言掩盖不住事实。
the building area of 10000 square
metres建筑面积....
&& The hotel
has the building area of 10000 square metres.
an area of 100 sq.
meters面积100平方米
&8. serve all kinds
of foods of Chinese and Western
styles供应中西方美食.
The restaurant serves all kinds of foods of Chinese and Western
They served the guests a wonderful
dinner.他们以盛宴招待客人们.
serve the people heart and
soul全心全意地为人民服务
the past serve the present and foreign things serve China.古为今用,
洋为中用。
第11篇范文
Our English teacher Mr Li is handsome, patient and kind to us
students and whenever we have a&problem he
would always try his best to help us out.&
Although Mr Li is already an expert in English teaching, he keeps
learning new knowledge in this field. Besides, he has an ability to
make his lessons lively and interesting, which arouses our interest
in studying English.&
During his work, Mr Li also
communicates frequently with parents through conferences or
interviews, written school reports and making telephone calls. I
feel so lucky to have such a good teacher who has taught me so
范文& 读写任务(
双语报第8期)
The&passage mainly
shows&that some European countries like
France and Spain will take action against Google’s behavior of
collecting user data secretly and Google will be heavily
I think it’s completely wrong for Google to collect users’
information secretly and Google should be punished for its
behavior. Letting out personal information may ruin one’s fame or
cause the loss of wealth.
 For example, last month, my friend’s mother received a call saying
that her son had been injured in an accident. She was asked to pay
some money into a bank account because her son needed an operation
immediately. But actually her son was safe at school. It turned out
that she had been cheated because her personal information had been
 Therefore, it is of great importance for us to protect our
personal information. What we should do is to be cautious about our
personal information such as address, telephone number, email
address, etc, especially when we are chatting
第13篇& 范文
&& 基础写作(共1小题;满分15分)
以下是一场关于“Digital
Textbook(数字课本)”的讨论会的信息。
学校报告厅
高一、高二、高三等三个年级的60名学生代表及10位教师
是否应该在高中使用数字课本代替纸质课本
①数字教科书比传统的纸质教科书便宜。
②数字教科书将会改变课堂的本质。
③数字教科书会将教师变成学生学习过程中的伙伴。
④数字教科书会加重学生对电子设备的依赖程度。
[写作内容]&
你是学校校报的小记者,请根据以上信息写一篇关于此次讨论会的报道,内容包括:
1.讨论会的基本信息;
2.参会人员的主要意见。
写作要求]&
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]&
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
&&既往背过的同类句型&&
1、范文第4-1篇----基础写作(第二次摸底测试)&
After the Sanlu
contaminated milk powder issue broke out, in our school we carried
out& a survey&
among the 3, 000 students on whether they still drink milk
.& According to the results, we find
week, we&did &a survey among the
3, 000 students in our school on whether they still drink milk
&On October 9, 2013, a discussion about "Digital
Textbooks" was conducted / held / made / in the School Lecture
Hall,&and& 10 teachers as well as
60 students from Senior 1, Senior 2 and Senior 3 attended it as
representatives. The topic for it was
"Should digital textbooks be used to replace traditional paper
textbooks in Senior High School?"
&The&students and teachers present
offered&different opinions,
and&the first
opinion&is&that
digital books&are cheaper
than traditional
ones.&& They agree that digital textbooks will change the
nature of traditional classes and that teachers will become
students'&companions&/partners
rather than&simple &instructors
in the learning process.&&&
However, during the discussion some
have pointed out /expressed that
students&may become more addicted to
more& dependent on / electronic devices /
instruments/tools/products as digital books& are
used by&the students&all the
&& ( Using& digital
books& may make the young students more dependent
on electronic& tools /products&
with them more popular among the
students&.)
Typhoon Usagi struck Guangdong China just after the Mid-autumn
Festival and caused 25 deaths. It damaged houses, stopped traffic
and transports and cut off water and electricity supply. It also
kept fishermen onshore and students off
school.(W:37)
(1)你家乡有哪种自然灾害?常造成哪些破坏?
report reminds me of my hometown.&Typhoon
is also a common natural disaster in my hometown. As is described in the
passage, typhoon is also a common natural disaster in my
hometown. When typhoon breaks out in my hometown, there
are often strong winds and heavy rains.&
The strong winds and heavy rains caused by typhoon usually
damage houses, stop traffic and
transports and cut off& electricity and
water& supply. We can see lots of young
trees are broken and flood run into streets and low
(2)描述你或朋友在此灾害发生时的一次经历;
year when Usagi hit my hometown
that evening, I was on my way home from school. I had much
difficulty in walking home in such a strong wind. The strong wind
blew away my umbrella, and what's worse,I almost fell
down&&because of
&the strong wind.&
I had been told typhoon was coming but never thought it would cause
so much damage. I became scared and tried my best to run into a
shop . Hardly had I run into the shop when an air-conditioner fell
down on the ground just in front of me! I was so frightened that I
did not d Later&the
shopkeeper&&accompanied
me&home /sent me
home. That's the most frightening experience that I have
(3)你对应对这种灾害的建议。
suggest that we should always take the warning seriously and make
good preparations. Stay at home and fasten firmly everything in the
house.Only in this way can we&avoid danger
that the disaster& causes
I suggest that we should&pay great
attention to the weather/& typhoon
forecast&and make good preparations in
order to avoid being hit in the&bad
weather. Stay at home and fasten firmly everything in the house.
Only in this way can we&avoid danger that
the disaster& causes
第15篇 必修二
After&class
Activities
Nowadays,after&class activities are
becoming&more &and more popular
in high schools, so in our school there are various kinds of
activities,such as arts and sports,&which
we&are interested in& very
much.& Playing
football and reading stories are my favorites
which do me lots of
good. Besides building up my body
my knowledge,they also free me from the heavy work of
my& suggestions about after&class
activities,& I think,
Therefore, I'll
say dear friendsplease
part in after&class
activities
第16篇 必修二
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hua,a Chinese student taking summer
courses in your university, and now I'm writing to ask for help.
I came here from China last month and
found my courses interesting. However,
I have so much& difficulty&in
listening that I&don't
know&how to &take
notes in class . Having
been told& the Learning Center provides
help for students , I'm& anxious to get help from
you and I would appreciate it very
much if& you&are kind enough me
to help me. I have no
第17篇(说明文限时讲练)
以下是东江的基本信息及相关报道。
基本信息:
(1)地理:珠江的一个支流,发源于江西省,流经江西、广东
(2)长度:约523公里
(3)资源:水产资源丰富,盛产各种鱼类
相关报道:
(1)东江被人称作“母亲河”,是香港及几个城市居民的主要饮水资源。
(2)随着经济的发展和人口的增加,目前,工业、饮用水需求逐年上升:而另一方面,任意排放污水,水质下降。
(3)水资源形势严峻,要节约用水,全力保证东江的水质。
【写作内容】根据以上信息写一篇东江的介绍,内容包括:
1. 东江的基本信息
2. 东江的相关报道。
【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容.
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。&&&&&&
Dongjiang/East River, a branch of the Pearl River,
originates/starts from Jiangxi Province and flows through Jiangxi
and Guangdong Province. Covering/ With a length of 523 kilometres,
the river& is rich in all
kinds& of fishes. Called Mother River by
the&local people,& the
river provides drinking water for the local residents living in the
cities along it and Hong Kong people. With the
economy&&fast developing
and&the &population increasing at
present, people need more and more industrial water and drinking
water every year, while the water quality is getting worse and
worse because people haven't taken measures to prevent the waste
water from flowing into the river in the past
years.& The serious situation of water resources
requires people to save water and make every effort to ensure water
quality in the Dongjiang River.
第18篇& 中国梦想秀
haven't seen you
&especially
from their own children.
&The picture shows us a touching
moment&when&a little girl comes to
greet her working mom. Realizing(realize) her mom must be very
tired after a daygirl
helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.In
,seldom do I pay attention to what mother needs and
feelsreturn.
bit to help with the
everyday washing
你是校报记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:
学生会的志愿者
合理使用二手课本
开学初,给新生赠送二手课本
节约资源,帮助困难学生
激励使用这些书的同学加倍努力
越来越多的人愿意将用过的书送给需要的人
无形中加强了互助的精神
&第23篇&读写任务
elephant was constantly disturbed by a restless fly, who asked the
elephant about the secret of remaining calm. The elephant concluded
that calmness would be obtained when one's senses and attention
were focused.
(1)大象和苍蝇的故事给你的启示;
After reading the story, I was inspired by what the elephant said.
The ability to focus one’s attention is the key to success in doing
anything. Just like the fly, a person who is easily distracted by
the surroundings will feel restless and tired, unable to achieve
his success.
(2)讲述你(或你朋友)因为太多干扰而受到影响的经历;
This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a
Senior One student. When I was in Grade One, I was so excited to
find that there were many after-class activities organized by the
Student Council intended for students. It seemed that a lot of
groups were suitable to me. I focused my attention on after-school
activities, so my study was ignored and I fell
(3)你打算上高三后怎样保持专注、专心.
Concentrate on your work, and you will succeed whatever you do. In
my opinion, as a Grade 12 student, I must remind
me& that in order to pass the college
entrance examination I must concentrate on my study. Therefore,
I'll try my best& to focus all my attention
on my study.
第24篇基础写作反映信
话题:校园中的乱涂和乱扔垃圾现象
students: makes our school dirty and
unpleasant, is
clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble
about.I wonder& if the school could
place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such
behaviour.At the same
time,,,
第25篇基础写作How
we can build up a harmonious family
harmonious family is essential to our personal development
and our physical and mental health. A
harmonious family is always full of warmth, love and
laughter in which parents and children not only show concern for
each other but also respect and understand each other. If a child grows up in a harmonious family , he is
more likely to be cheerful and optimistic, and meanwhile, in such a
harmonious family parents are sure&to live
happily and more healthily. To create
such a harmonious family parents should be rule models for their
children in words and behavior and often communicate with them.
As children of the family, we should
show understanding for our parents’ hardship, and try to share
their burdens by doing housework voluntarily and so on. If you do
so, our home will always be
harmonious.
(汕头一模)&&&
以“善举的影响”为话题谈谈你的想法
When the author, an oversea student, was badly ill, a shopkeeper
made him a sandwich and offered him hot soup. Touched/ moved by her
kindness, the author decided to be& kind to
others as her.(W:34)
)上文使你回忆起曾经有谁的爱心举动使你感到温暖;
The passage reminds me of Mr Xu, my teacher of English, he just
encouraged me not to give up. Although sometimes I did't study
hard,&he even did what he could to help me
to&keep confident. Especially, whenever I
failed, he would comfort me and encourage me to have a positive
attitude towards failure.&&
(2)在感到温暖之余,你是否受到这个举动的影响,会把这份爱心传递下去?为什么?
What Mr&Xu did for me moved me deeply, so
gradually I have& made greater progress in
my studies. It is his kindness and encouragement that make me feel
warm and moved. With such a kind teacher, there is no doubt that I
will learn to be kind to others as him in future. I believe that as
long as I do so, others can also feel the kindness of Miss
&(3)进入大学校园后,你将如何继续传递爱心?
When I enter a college, I will keep kindness in mind. If possible,
I will try to become a youth volunteer in order to offer help to
others and pass on kindness. No matter how hard it is, I will do my
best to help those people in need.
篇&&&&基础写作&
(双语报20期)
If you want to eat something traditional and special, Shangxiajiu
Street is your best choice. Guangzhou has a lot of wonderful views
which you cannot miss, such as Guangzhou Tower, Beijing Road and
Yuexiu Park. It is convenient to take a bus or subway in Guangzhou.
However, you had better not go out during the rush hour because you
will get stuck. You can find a lot of hotel information online, but
I strongly suggest that you should find one near the subway station
so that you can save a lot of time and effort.
读写任务& (双语报20期)
&& This passage tells
us a piece of news which said that a teenage girl killed herself
because she thought she was fat and ugly. But in fact, she wasn't
fat at all.
&&&青少年为什么在意自己的外表?
There are many reasons why&young
people& pay too much attention to their images.
Nowadays,early teens are a time when teenagers become more aware
of& images — as well as how other peers look and
how they fit in. They might start to compare themselves with other
people or media images.
 在意自己的外表的影响。However,
it’s not always easy to like every part of our looks. When we get
stuck on the negative comments it can really harm our social,
physical, and emotional growth. If we& pay too
much attention to our images, we may ignore something important in
&&&怎样看待自己的外表
Everydody is not perfect. Humans, by definition, are
imperfect.& It's the imperfections that make each
of us unique and original. So we should no pay too much attention
to our images.
基础写作(双语报14期)
human beings are constantly exploring the earth, yesterday we had a
discussion on whether we human beings should explore the earth in
our geography class. Some of the students support the idea because
they think we could know more about the earth and find more
available resources through our exploration activities. Moreover,
we could show our wisdom and courage by doing so.
&&& However,
other students are against the exploration activities, saying too
many human activities might do harm to the earth. In addition, they
believe we should leave some resources to the future generations as
resources are limited.
读写任务(双语报14期)
The passage mainly tells us some foreign students have trouble
making friends. Comparatively speaking, in the US, students from
English-speaking countries and some parts of Europe feel better
about their friendships than those from East Asia.
&&& Friendship
is very important for foreign students. With friends, they will
feel less lonely. Also, with the help of their friends, they may
have better language skills, better academic performance and better
attitudes towards the host country.
&&& As for
foreign students’ having trouble in making friends, the first
reason must be culture shock. Also, language barriers
are& an important reason. In addition, maybe some
foreign students are too shy to talk with others initiatively. Last
but not the least, foreign students are not good at English also
makes it more difficult for them to make
&&& To solve
this problem, before going abroad, foreign students should learn
more about the culture of their host country and try to have a
better command of the host country’s language. And then, it is
necessary for foreign students to be braver to talk with others
after their arriving at the host country.
读写任务(双语报27期)
&&&(概述一)
&The passage is a story about honesty. Silly Ray
was given many donations after he honestly returned a diamond ring
to Sarah Darling. More, he got the opportunity to reunite with his
long-lost brother.
&&(概述二)
Poor Silly Ray not only received many donations but also reunited
with his long-lost brother because he honestly returned a diamond
ring to rich Sarah Darling. The story shows that honesty is surely
the best policy.
第32篇&&&&&
A tragedy turning into a
The Clark family, who were unlucky to miss boarding Titanic because
one son was bitten by a dog, were fortunately saved. This story is
about a tragedy turning into a blessing. (31
This story is about a tragedy turning into a blessing. The Clark
family, who were unlucky to miss boarding Titanic because one son
was bitten by a dog, were luckily saved
fortunately.
Jerry, my friend, once had a similar experience as the Clark
family. Last year her family were to make a trip to Beijing ,but
just on the afternoon before their trip, she was knocked down by a
car when crossing a road and her leg was seriously hurt. She would
have to lie in bed for 3 months and their trip had to be cancelled.
That evening, she couldn’t help crying the moment she saw me. I
made efforts to comfort her and promised to help her with English.
I spent much& time& helping her.
When she was recovered, her English improved
Now she often says she is thankful for the accident, which has a
great influence on her study and her thought. Facing a tragedy, she
can keep calm, expecting it to turn into a
读写任务(揭阳一模)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Once upon a time in a land far far away, there was a wonderful old
man who loved everything. Animals, spiders,
insects...
One day while walking through
the woods the nice old man found a cocoon(茧) of a butterfly. He
took it home.
A few days later, a sm he sat and watched the
butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body
through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any
progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it
could go no farther.
Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of
scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly
then came out easily.
But it had a swollen body and
small, shriveled (萎缩的) wings. The man continued to watch the
butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would
enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither
happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life
crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never
was able to fly.
What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that
the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly
to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid
from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be
ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the
Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we
were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would
cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been.
And we could never fly.
[写作内容]
以约30词概括短文内容要点;
2. 以约120词就
“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”这一话题发表你的看法,并包含以下要点:
你读了这个故事后的感受;
叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;
假如你是父母一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?
读写任务(揭阳一模)&
Once& a kind man&
cut a cocoon open& to decrease the pain of
a butterfly when watching& it struggling
out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of
his help. The story shows without struggles, one can never become
strong. (45 words)
(1) 你读了这个故事后的感受;
After reading the story I can't help beginning to think about my
life. / The story sets me thinking. Our life is the same
as& this story tells us. Sometimes,
struggles or obstacles in our life are quite necessary for our
growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our
willpower , determination and perseverance and contribute to our
success. Without these struggles or obstacles , we could never
achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the
story.& Without these struggles or
obstacles , never could we become
stronger.&&
叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;
So now it reminds me of how some parents deal with their children.
Nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever
they can to satisfy the child's needs and even do for him what
should be done by himself.&
Therefore/Consequently, the child is unable to look after himself
without his parents' help. Too much care from parents gradually
make children lose chances to grow strong by overcoming obstacles.
Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never
withstand a storm”.
假如你是父母一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?
If I were a parent, I would
first let him keep in mind that life is never easy and that he
should be ready to face any difficulties. Besides, I would
encourage him to experience some hardships in life instead of
protecting him from difficulties. I would also provide them with
chances to fight for his bright future by overcoming challenges
alone.& As we all know to spoil children
means doing harm to them so parents should encourage children to
learn to be
independent.
读写任务(深圳二模)
读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)阅读下面微博上的短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Designed by our monitor, we has a story telling contest at the
class meeting. All of us were very active, and everybody said that
the most touching story was the one told by Zhang Hua, which won
the first prize and made the meeting more meaningful So, here, I
would like to share:
Not long ago, my friends encouraged me to try a 150-mile ride trip,
an annual event that raised money for the poor children in the
far-away mountains.
When I registered, the idea seemed excellent-to support a worthy
cause while riding for a long distance. The ride began in the
morning, and for the first few hours, I felt wonderful. But by the
end of the day, I felt tired and
Every excuse my brain pushed out seemed to travel right down to my
legs. “I can’t handle this,” and “everyone else is a better rider”
were translated into shortness of breath. I was sure I’d have to
Then I noticed that the lone rider in front of me looked different
in some way. But she was too far away for me to tell why. So I
pushed my self to catch up. There she was, riding alone slowly but
steadily, with a slight and determined smile on her face-and she
has only one leg.
My focus changed at that moment, For a whole day I’d been doubting
my body, but now I knew it was the will that would help me reach my
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就“班会课”发表你的看法,内容包括:
(1)为什么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘?
(2)举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响;
(3)你怎样看待班会课对学生的影响。
概述一 At a class meeting, Zhang Hua won the 1st prize in a story
telling contest, which was so touching that the writer noted it
down to share in his blog.
概述二 The writer shares a touching story in his blog. At a class
meeting, Zhang Hua won the first prize by telling a story. In a
race he was so moved by a disabled rider's determination that
he& understood it was will that helps him
reach his goal.
1)为什么张华的故事让此次班会课令人难忘?
In his story, he
took part in
experienced
a volunteer ride trip to raise money for poor children. He had
thought it was as easy as a cake, but then, feeling tired and
bored, he had a thousand reasons
to give up
when he noticed a one-legged lady before him. Seeing her determined
smile, Zhang Hua
was inspired
and finally reached his goal. What a great story and class meeting!
It is inspiring us how to
face difficulties in our
(2)举例说明班会课对你学习和成长的影响;
was addicted to computer games, and later I was so
affected by the computer games that it influenced my school work
terribly. Then at a class meeting, my head teacher organized many
activities to let us know the bad effects of being addicted to
computer games. I was shocked and realized my danger! If it had not
attended that valuable class meeting, I would have been another
person. I mean without that class meeting I would have been ruined
by computer games.
(3)你怎样看待班会课对学生的影响
Therefore, class meetings are our expectations, because they are an
effective form of school moral education and the important way to
change the students’ thought. Therefore, a good head teacher often
attaches great importance to a weekly class
基础写作(2014深圳一模)
你接受了一项写作任务,为英语校报写一篇快讯,报道一次比赛的情况。
【写作内容】
保护森林,人人有责!
比赛目的:培养保护环境习惯
主  题:废物*利用创意作品**比赛
组织者:学生会
评选过程:1.元月1日至2月10日
2.有900多人参赛,提交了1,000多幅作品
3.材料主要为废物,利用网络展示
结  果:1.有近200名同学分获一、二、三等奖
2.李明用旧报纸和杂志制作的作品“保护森林,人人有责”
获得了第一名
意  义:同学们显示了热情,提高了环保意识
&*废物:waste
material&&&&&&&&&&&&
**创意作品:creative works
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
&In order&to cultivate the good
habit of protecting the environment, the Students Union held a
creative work competition with the theme of making good use of
waste materials. From Jan. 1st to Feb, 10th, more than 900
students&took part in&the
competition and presented through the Internet over 1,000 works
mainly made of waste materials. About 200 participants got the
first, second and third prizes respectively. Zhang Hua, whose work
& “Protecting the forests, including you and me!”was made of old
newspapers and magazines, got the first place. In this activity,
the students not only have shown their enthusiasm, but also have
raised their awareness of environmental
protection.
句型提炼:
order&to do sth of doing sth, S&did a... with the theme of doing
2、 time, S did sth and did sth
3、S, whose&... & “...!” was made of sth
and sth, got the first
4、In..., S not only have&done their
enthusiasm, but also have&done their awareness of
读写任务(2014深圳一模)
读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
What a bad day today! Tom suddenly fell ill and was sent to
hospital by my neighbors. The doctor said he has been suffering
lung cancer and his life is in danger! Everybody was shocked and
felt a pity for this good man.
Tom, who is a famous writer about 40 years old, lives just next
door. He is kind and worm-hearted and always ready to give a
helping hand to others when in need, so he enjoys great popularity
in our neighborhood.
often came to my house to tell me how to write stories and
encourage me with his own experience. He told me he was born in a
poor family. As a little boy, he had a dream to become a famous
writer. He overcame thousands of difficulties to have entered a
university. After graduation, he began to publish story books, and
up till now, he is very famous around the
Unfortunately, when
he was young, he just got into the habit of smoking and became a
heavy smoker, which has ended up as an invisible killer of his
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就“Health
and Cause”为题谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1)邻居们为汤姆感到惋惜的原因是什么?
(2)你从汤姆身上学到了什么?
(3)你对身体健康与事业的看法。
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不能直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
Health and
概述一Tom, a kind and hardworking professional writer, suddenly fell
ill, and was suffering from lung cancer due to the bad habit of
smoking, which shocked his neighbors and made them feel
&概述二After hearing that Tom, a kind and hardworking
professional writer, suddenly fell ill. His neighbors were shocked
and they felt sorry for him.
(1)邻居们为汤姆感到惋惜的原因是什么?
&&& All the neighbors felt it a
pity for Tom because he is really a promising writer. He is so
young and maybe it is just the beginning of his great career.
Moreover, his great personality has gained their sincere respect.
Unfortunately, the deadly cancer will stop him from his
(2)你从汤姆身上学到了什么?
Tom’s story, I understand that we
shouldn't&&have
the&bad habit of smoking in order to have good
health. We can't care too much about our career and ignore our
health. Besides, his strong will has helped him to have overcome so
many setbacks to realize his dream, and this is what I should learn
from him, too.
(3)你对身体健康与事业的看法。
From Tom’s story, we understand
better that physical health and career are both important. Anyway,
health should come first, without which we can achieve nothing. But
if a man is just strong in body but has no ambitions for career,
his life will become aimless and worthless. Therefore, we should
have the right attitude towards career and
基础写作(2014广州一模)
& White tea,
which gets its name from its silver-white color, is regarded
as one of the six major Chinese tea types.
White Tea is famous for its beautiful
silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medicinal
effects. The longer it is
preserved,& the better effect it has. White Tea is
good for health if drunk frequently and (it
)can be used in preventing disease like high blood pressure
and helping relieve the pain of toothache and
范文第6篇&
第2期A版&&
Lion dance is a traditional Chinese folk art,
which is performed across China to celebrate festivals or
ceremonies. It is usually
performed by two performers.
of the performers plays the lion's head while the other plays the
lion's body and tail. During the
performance, the performers imitate all kinds of movements of lions
to the rhythm of gongs and drums.& With the
immigration of Chinese people, this art form
has& spread all over the world, and it is
especially popular in Southeast Asia.
读写任务(2014广州一模)
In the passage, the writer describes how he forgot his family’s
thrifty tradition and eventually met with financial difficulty.
This helped him realize the importance of thriftiness and start to
practise thriftiness again.
对你来说节俭是什么。
To me, being thrifty means valuing money, making the most what I
have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary
&&&&你认为节俭是否重要,为什么?
Thrift is an old and dated concept to many young people, but I
think thrift is still important nowadays. As life has become a lot
easier, people tend to indulge in a luxurious lifestyle. That’s why
I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than
ever before.
就生活中如何做到节俭提一些建议。
Actually, it is very easy and simple for us to be thrifty. Learn to
turn off lights when leaving the room. Do not use the
air-conditioners unless necessary. Bring our water bottle from home
rather than spend money on soft drinks. When we go to school or
work, we should use public transports to avoid needless driving and
parking. When we have meals in restaurants, we should order just
enough food.
&&&&Remember,
a smart person is not one who always tries to impress others by
showing off their wealth, but one who spares no effort to save for
the future and for others.
读写任务(2014广州一模)
&&&&概述一:
The writer recalls the stress and economic problems he had after
moving to a big city, forgetting the thrifty habits of his youth
and wasting all his money. At last, he learned his lesson and
became thrifty once more.
概述二:The writer used
to be thrifty, but after moving into a big city, he began wasting
money , forgetting the thrifty habits. Experiencing some problems
in money, he realized the importance of being thrifty and learned
to be thrifty again.
对你来说节俭是什么。
&I think a thrifty person is someone who
uses only what they need and avoids waste. Being thrifty can save
us money, but more importantly, it is necessary if we want to save
our planet. In the face of growing environmental problems, I
believe it is more necessary than ever to reduce the amount of
rubbish and pollution each individual produces. If we fail to
control the amount of waste we produce, our society and our planet
are doomed and this concern must overweigh any short-term
satisfaction we get from buying and consuming
你认为节俭是否重要,为什么?
It is for this reason that I buy as much fresh food as possible,
rather than packaged food, which requires much more energy to
produce and adds to our pollution problems. I also try to cycle or
walk everywhere I go, or at least use public transport rather than
getting a taxi or depending on a private car. Actions like these
keep me fit and healthy, help the environment and leave me with
more money in my pocket! Why don’t you try these too? You might
really enjoy the results.
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节&基础写作(共1小题; 满分15分)
&假如你是校报的小记者,最近对某名人进行了一次采访,以下是采访的情况:
时间:9月3号& 星期二
对象:心理学家(psychologist)广州大学李教授
主题: 高三学生如何减压
李教授的解读:
1.&主要原因是家长和学生把高考看得过于重要,把它看成是终极目标。
1)&积极心态最重要;
2)&适当运动能有效减压;
3)&注意饮食均衡;
4)&保证充足睡眠。
[写作内容] &
请根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,内容包括采访的时间、对象、主题及李教授的解读。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子完成采访报道。
参考词汇:& the College Entrance Examination
overwhelming stress 过大压力
[评分标准] &句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
参考范文:
On Tuesday, September 3, I had an interview with Professor Li, a
physiologist in Guangzhou University, about how Senior 3 students
can release the overwhelming stress. According to Professor Li, the
reason why Senior 3 students are suffering the overwhelming stress
is that they and their parents attach so much importance to the
College Entrance Examination, and they even look on it as their
final goals in their lives. He suggests that they should take a
positive attitude towards the examination. Then they had better do
more exercise, which can be a helpful way to release their stress.
What’s more, they are supposed to keep a balanced diet and make
sure that they have enough sleep.
第二节读写任务(共1小题;
满分25分)
阅读下面的短文及图片,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。&
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is
trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps,
but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting
What does the message conveyed here? Our earth is suffering severe
damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures
to protect it?
The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be
taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the
environment.
Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting
empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports
goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily
follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than
complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with
actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to
accomplish.
【写作内容】
&1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;
&2. 然后以约120个词就 “行动胜于空谈”
的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:
1) 世界地球日的设计意图:提高人们对地球环境的意识;
2) 行动还是空谈?你的看法如何?给出理由并提出一至两个具体的做法;
3) 呼吁人们每天都应以实际行动保护我们的地球。
【写作要求】
你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照上面材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。Ks5u
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
参考范文:
The message conveys that actions speak louder than words. We should
take practical measures to celebrate Earth Day and to better the
environment.
Earth Day is designed to inspire awareness and appreciation for the
Earth's environment. How should we celebrate it? Should we just
shout empty slogans or take practical measures to protect our
earth? I think it should be the latter because “Actions speak
louder than words”. We can recycle all the things we do use for the
day or find other uses for things that we no longer use or carry a
cloth bag for carrying things in and recycle our plastic bags.
Remember: Every day is Earth Day. Anything to help our environment
is a perfect thing to do on Earth Day and every day. Don't restrict
yourself to learn about how you can make a
difference to environmental protection all the time. And put it
into practice.
【写作内容】
&&&&&高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。你班就这一话题正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考,并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料。
相貌、体形不美&
不被他人理解,朋友少&
学习滞后,压力大
2、解决办法
不必在意;内在美更重要
加强沟通;坦诚;友好
制定学习计划;养成良好的学习习惯
【写作要求】
1.只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
2.文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入文章词数。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
Good morning,boys and girls,
We high school students do have some growing pains,but we can get
rid of them correctly and wisely.
________________________________________________________________________
That's all.Thank you.
【写作指导】
本篇书面表达是一篇基础写作,要求考生根据表格中列出的内容要点表达出高中生在成长中面临的烦恼,并提出一些切实可行的解决办法。
写作时,考生要严格按照题目要求,用5个句子组织成文,并表达出全部内容要点。考生在表述要点时要层次分明且富有逻辑性,概括要点时要全面准确。另外,为了增加文章的逻辑性,考生可以适当使用一些连接过渡词,如:firstly,secondly,what's
more,on the one hand...on the
other等。当然,一些复合句式,如宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等在高分文章中也是必不可少的。
【参考范文】
Good morning,boys and girls,
& We high &school students
usually do have some growing pains,but we can get
rid& of them correctly and wisely.
&First,some of us are upset/concerned about their
body shapes and looks / appearances,but I don't think it necessary
because it is one's inner beauty that matters.&
Second,we sometimes seem to be misunderstood =&
seem not to be& understood by our teachers,parents
or classmates and some of us have fewer friends.&
Facing this,we can find a proper time
to have a heart&-to-&heart talk
with them,trying to remove the misunderstanding and we should keep
in mind that being open&-minded and friendly will
do you good. Third,we may fall behind others in our studies,which
makes us stressed / puts him under a great
stress. A better way to solve this problem,I think,is
that we should make a good study plan and form a good learning
habit,which ensure us to learn more efficiently.
&&&&&&&&&&
&That's all.Thank you.
We mustn't judge by
appearances.我们不可以貌取人。
第44篇读写任务
请阅读下面的短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Here's the old tale of a Japanese
samurai warrior(勇士)and his three sons.He takes out an arrow and
asks each son to break it;they do so easily.Then he takes out three
arrows,bound together,and asks his sons to break them.No one
can,“That is your lesson,” the samurai tells them.“If you three
stick together,you will never be defeated.”
That old story is taking on fresh life as today's leaders find that
their ability to meet challenges rests more and more upon
partnerships with others.
America's best leaders increasingly reflect this spirit of
teamwork.Princeton University President Shirley Tilghman and Brown
University President& Ruth Simmons have not
only achieved significant breakthroughs on their own campuses but
also joined to lend a helping hand to Simmons's alma
mater(母校),Dillard University,after Hurricane Katrina.
Technology and globalization are also driving much of this
change.With fast growing markcts overseas,large American
corporations find that partners in Enrope,Asia,and Latin America
are keys to growth.The Bush administration,despite its
go&it&alone approach,relies heavily
on other friendly governments to share intelligence about
terrorism.And no country can deal with climate change alone because
the atmosphere reflects carbon dioxide built up around the
【写作内容】
1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2.你对“合作”的认识。
3.结合你校园生活中的一个事例,说明“合作”的重要性。【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语句连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作指导】&&
本篇书面表达是一篇材料作文,首先要求用约30词概括材料内容,然后再根据材料以约120词谈谈对“合作”的认识,包括的内容要点有:一,对“合作”的认识;二,讲述校园中的一个事例,可以是真实的,也可以是虚构的;三,说明“合作”的重要性。在写作过程中,考生要严格按照写作要求作文,全面准确地概括内容要点,同时语言表述要层次分明、具有逻辑性。另外,材料作文切忌照抄原文中的句子。为了增加文章得分的砝码,考生还需恰当地使用一些连接过渡词和复杂句式,以增强文章的广度和深度。
【参考范文】&&&
By telling an old tale and giving examples of great leaders and
successful corporations,the writer emphasizes that
teamwork/partnership/cooperation is extremely vital,especially in a
world of economic globalization and high technology.
I can't agree more with the writer on this point. Years of school
life has taught me that teamwork is the most important. I still
remember when I was chosen monitor of my class when I was in Grade
10. I did most of the duties myself while other students cared
little about class activities,As a result,I was tired and
depressed. Then I turned to my teacher, Mr. Wang,
&and he advised me to cooperate with
others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates
and have everyone do their part in class. With the wisdom and
devotions of my classmates,I felt much happier and everything
seemed to be easier. Therefore,it was working in teams instead of
on my own that freed me of trouble and made my work more
efficient.
&In brief,only through cooperation
/teamwork / partnership are we able to stand out in today's
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