英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,i can surf the internet againi have been used to be without the internet for two weeks.now i am able to surf the internet again.doday i am not feeling that happy_百度作业帮
英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,i can surf the internet againi have been used to be without the internet for two weeks.now i am able to surf the internet again.doday i am not feeling that happy
英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,i can surf the internet againi have been used to be without the internet for two weeks.now i am able to surf the internet again.doday i am not feeling that happy because the conservator asked me not to live in my domitory ,i am angry with her .she said some words,which depressed me.i don't want to mention it any more.any way i am not feeling happy.but now i can surf the internet.so i can relax myself and i can throw off the bad mood.just now i watched the gossip girl.and i am feeling much better now .and my roomates told me ignore it .so it is .live my life.just as it is.
"used to be" 去了
am able to 改为can
be able to 表示有..能力 而can 单纯地表示可以 能
doday--today 这是写错了吧 that -- so 如此地 那么地 都用so and I am angry.. the gossip-- a gossiping told me to 还有记得大小写要分明噢 全小写其实看着挺别扭的
问题不大 注意你打字错误 doday-today那句she said some words,...从正式英语来说最好该成she said something which depressed me.倒数第二句，and my roomates told me to ignore her.ignore后面最好跟人，就是说忽视那个人做的事．语法方面还不错 没有什么问题．
第一行就有啦
be 后面应该有谓语的
再往后看整篇都有问题 时态问题比较严重
不好意思了 没时间高考英语语法：短文改错分类解析-代词
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高考英语语法：短文改错分类解析-代词
　　一、考点规律分析
　　短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾语变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
　　二、真题单句归纳
　　(1) David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (去掉 it，因它与其前的关系代词 which 语义重复) (全国卷)
　　(2) When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head. (head 前加 his，汉语可&摇头&，而英语的习惯要说 shake one&s head) (全国卷)
　　(3) We climb everywhere, not only in America. They have been to Europe many times. (They 改为 We，前后人称不一致) (全国卷)
　　(4) And I can&t forget the good food you cooked for I. (I 改为 me，因介词之后的人称代词要用宾格) (全国卷)
　　(5) I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon. (去掉 both。因 both 与后面的 two 意义重复，况且词序安排也不对) (全国卷)
　　(6) The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (his 改为 their，因前面的 the Smiths 指的是&史密斯夫妇&或&史密斯一家&，是复数意义) (全国卷)
　　(7) And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. (they 改为 we，根据句意，主从句的主语应该一致) (全国卷)
　　(8) Now I can&t watch much television, but a few years ago& (去掉 much，因为从下文看作者现在根本就不看电视) (全国卷)
　　(9) Now someone at home reads instead. (someone 改为 everyone 或 everybody。从全文语义来看，应为&每一个人&) (全国卷)
　　(10) I&m spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it. (去掉 all，因 all 与 whole 语义重复) (北京春季卷)
　　(11) The day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher talked to me. (English 前加 my，teacher 为单数可数名词，前面要有限定词) (全国卷)
　　(12) I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works. (it 改为 they，因它表示 those classes) (北京春季卷)
　　(13) &in any other words, I am an only child. (去掉 any，因 in other words 为固定短语，意思是&换句话说&) (全国卷)
　　(14) For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place I couldn&t find. (them 改为it，因它指代上文提到的a chocolate cake) (北京春季卷)
　　(15) Then he ate it all, by himself. He never helped other. (other改为others，others 泛指&其他人&) (北京春季卷)
　　(16) The three of them were very excited. (them 改为 us，因短文用的是第一人称) (全国卷)
　　(17) But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son. (his 改为 their，因要与其前的 his parents 保持一致) (安徽春季卷)
　　(18) According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. (any 改为 many / some，由句意决定) (北京春季卷)
　　(19) &and tried to translate anything into English. (anything 改为 everything，根据上下文句意确定) (全国卷)
　　(20) &as I was learning to express me in simple English. (me 改为 myself，express oneself 为固定结构，意为&表明意思、意见，表达思想&) (全国卷)
　　(21) One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (showed 后加 it，showed 在此作及物动词，后面缺少宾语) (全国卷)
　　(21) At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. (me 改为 myself，根据主语和句意，此处应用反身代词) (江苏卷)
　　(22) And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own (your 改为 their，主语是 more and more people，故用代词their) (浙江卷)
　　(23) If any one of us had any difficulty in our life or study, the other would help him out.(other 改为 others，因为当某个人遇到困难时，&其余的所有人&都会帮他，而不是&另外的那一个人&会帮他) (天津卷)
　　(24) What&s more, you have to be friendly with your pupils and take good care of him. (him 改为 them，因为此处要代替的是 your pupils) (湖北卷)
　　三、模拟单句演练
　　(1) Here are some letters for you and he.
　　(2) She loves swimming. It keeps she fit.
　　(3) Here are the cats Auntie brought us. Take good care of it.
　　(4) Everyone here gets up earlier than her does.
　　(5) Here is my dog. It&s name is Petty.
　　(6) He opened mouth as if to say something.
　　(7) Don&t lose your heart. Try again.
　　(8) The Smiths have been married, but have no children of his own.
　　(9) I tell him everything, for he is a good friend of me.
　　(10) He smiled at her and laid her hand on hers.
　　(11) When you are away from home, you should look after you.
　　(12) If you have any question, put up hand.
　　(13) It&s a very important thing. You must think over carefully.
　　(14) I don& please show me some other.
　　(15) In order to catch the thief, the police did his best.
　　(16) This is the book which you bought it for me ten years ago.
　　(17) I&m very sorry about all the whole thing.
　　(18) When I got up, I found parents were preparing breakfast for me.
　　(19) Yes, money is very important, but it is not anything.
　　(20) At the airport, all his baggage was stolen, but soon he got them back.
Copyright &帮我看看这段有语法错误吗?we are not fortune tellers,we'll never be able to know what will happen next day,we may feel happy,anxious or sad,it seems that all our lives depend on the God.everybody steers a boat during one's whole life,there_百度作业帮
帮我看看这段有语法错误吗?we are not fortune tellers,we'll never be able to know what will happen next day,we may feel happy,anxious or sad,it seems that all our lives depend on the God.everybody steers a boat during one's whole life,there
帮我看看这段有语法错误吗?we are not fortune tellers,we'll never be able to know what will happen next day,we may feel happy,anxious or sad,it seems that all our lives depend on the God.everybody steers a boat during one's whole life,there are times when this boat may be struck down by the storms,sails safely or is going to sink,but we 'll chant for ourselves when we complete this wonderful long journey,unfortunately,those who abandon their boats in their long journey will be forgotten forever...
不加也可以的.
就是这点搞不明白，这点有没有特殊规定
没有。只能根据上下文。有的地方就是单复数都行。通常是泛指，大家都一样的东西。比如We want to live a peaceful life. want want to live peaceful lives.都行。Shawn Achor: The happy secret to better work | TED Talk |
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