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I eat healthy food 英语作文
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I have a healthy eating habit.I drink milk and eat vegetables every day，I don't eat coffe,because it's bad for myself.In my opinion,healthy is inportant!
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food.It's good
health.I usually eat
fruit and vegetable.And I
eat more healthy
drink coffee
cola.But I
drink milk
every day.And
food. Because
it's bad
health.（仅供参考，O(∩_∩)O谢谢）
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本人快要上学了，没什么时间上网了，这是一篇很短的，准备打在博客上，可是，我不知道语法有没有错误，恳请高手给我指出。然后，我个人觉得，用first ,seconed..等连接词不太好，能不能把我写的尽量连接通顺一点，美观一点。短文大意是说我上学了，很少上网，不闲聊。。 大家尽量在今天之内。谢谢！好的话，我再追加分，嘻嘻，我还有很多分。。都可以奉献一下。文章内容如下：First,I'm going to study.and I seldom surf the Internet. Seconed,I'm happy to know everyone,and I find fun in chatting. Third,I just have a half of day freedom every studyweek,and i won't have more time on QQ
Forth,I really hope to improve my study,get better than ever before,and cheer up everyone who i know~ Fifth,Sometimes,i think i will on QQ,please don't call me to disturb. at last ~Please remember there was a girl let you have a good time ever ,With you during the boring time.and what's more,let us keep intouch,OK?see u~
快慢也没有关系，关键是质量，。。 补充1！ 这不是自信不自信的事～有很多我都不太懂～ 补充2 让大家失望了，我也是高一的。。我也知道first,seconed~~这些不太好～这只是我的草稿而已，作文提纲而已，为了方便我写，就列成一啊，二啊，三啊，四啊，这样子……补充3 后来，发现自己没什么兴趣，写不下去了
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整篇帮你修改润色了！给我分吧！ 英语专业的，相信我啦这是对朋友们说的，应该更生活化，first ,seconed..等连接词太生硬了像写议论文。My dear friends:
I'm going to school, so I will seldom surf on the Internet.
I want to tell you that, I'm very happy to know everyone, and I have fun in chatting.
In the following term, I just have half a day of freedom on every study-week, and I won't have more time on QQ.
Most importantly, I really hope to improve my study get better than ever before. In addiction, I’d like to cheer up everyone who I know~
Although, I think I will on QQ sometimes because of study，please don't call me by QQ, otherwise you will disturb me.
At last ~Please remember there was a girl let you had a good time ever, and stayed with you during the boring time. What's more, let us keep in touch,OK? See u~
Yours. O_O芭芘girl
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surf on the Internet
数词从second以后均加上lya half day of freedomhave much time 无需用到比较级get better than beforecatch up with赶上、cheer up with 庆祝i will be on qqdon't disturb me/call methere is a girl that let you
我觉得你的那篇读下来有点奇怪不要用first ,seconed..等连接词把那些3掉你参考一下下面的内容和你的差不多我是根据你所要表达的意思来写的A few days later I'm going to go to school, and almost no time online .During the winter vacation, I found interesting in chatting, I am also pleased to recognize every one.When I start my school life , I just have a half of day freedom at every studyweek.So I did not have more time online. In the new semester, I want to improve study ,get batter than ever before .If I'm online please do not salvage to me.Finally ,please remember there was a girl let you have a good time ever ,With you during the boring time.What's more,let us keep intouch,OK?see u~
1.注意句子的开头大小写。 .大写 ,小写。 2.连接词可以用To begin with, secondly, next ,and then ,…… 3.开头，添加几句。 Hello everyone, how was your winter vacation?I'm very glad to make net friends with you and the new semester will come soon.So,I really have many things to say. 4.结尾。 写几句祝福，以后再见的话。 5.中间的内容你可以再想想，充实一下。 你自己再改改吧。我时间有限。
我来.. 我高一 英语一般
I'm going to school.So I will spend less times on Internet.Now,I want to say something to you.
I'm happy to know everyone,and I find fun in chatting.
In studyweek,I only have a half of day freedom,but I won't have more time with QQ.So I will use QQ sometime,but I hope you don't disturb me,Because I really hope I can improve my study.and have a good achievement.Thank you.
Please remember there had a girl let you happy,when you are in boring.what's more,let us keep in touch.OK? see you.
差不多了么 我的也可能有错. 但比你的好吧..- -b
一开始用first second 我觉得不好 别人看上去像是在读条例. 还是不用 就是一些想说的话. 我就没用first second. 对了 你读几年级??
First, I will go to study knowledge. I seldom surf the Internet. Second, I am glad to have known others very much find that hold office at court chatting. Thirdly, I free , more time having half of the day only, on every Forth learning from cycle and our will not be in QQ some, I hope that its get better studying , dodging, makes each person happy than improved me in the past indeed. I am in fifth, QQ sometimes, when going ahead , hope asks not contacting through a bleeper disturb me. Final , ask keep there in memory to there is one girl giving way to your and your in dull time. More people of institute were once happy. OK? See you! Live with happily!(怎么样?我改掉了一些,希望你喜欢)
楼主的意思是想表达想告诉朋友们自己要开学了所以会少上网吧。这样的文章不用first second之类的。我这样改你看看可不可以dear my friends,new semester is coming,so i can't have many time to surf the internet,i'm glad to meet you gays during the holiday,and i find a lot of fun in chatting with you,although i have a half day holidays every week.that means i cant always online,even i will be qq online sometimes,but dont disturb me unless you relly have something very inportant to tell me,please remenber i will always bring you joy .keep in touch with me!ok? see u
First of all,I want to say,As my new school term will start, I may spend less time on surfing the Internet.Even thought I just have a half of day free on each study-week,and I won't have much time on QQ,I'm still glad to meet more men,and quite interested in chatting with others. Most importantly, I really hope to improve my study get better than ever before.In the meanwhile I’d like to cheer up everyone who I know.Please remember me a girl who let you had a good time ever, and
accompany you during the boring time. So,let us keep in touch,OK? See u~ Best wishesYours truly. O_O芭芘girl 你的这篇原文的意思好像有些矛盾哟 ，一方面又说不愿闲聊，一方面又说“fun in chatting”既然不愿上Q，更拒绝“disturb”，别人又怎么跟你”keep in touch“呢？“君子之交淡淡如水”？还是只愿关键时刻，鼎力相助，而不愿平时闲谈扯淡呢？一方面你的意思好像表达的不够明确，另一方面，我个人认为，这样的友谊是很难维持的，不通过平日里的闲谈交流，加深理解，又如何能让别人了解你，信任你，并在重要的时刻想到你 找你帮忙呢？一孔之见，你说呢？
I spent most of my time on studying.So I seldom surf the Internet. I'm happy to know everyone,and I find it fun to chat with new people. I only have half a day to be free the entire week, so I don't have much time on QQ. I really hope to improve my study, get better grades than before,and make everyone happy. I will be on QQ sometimes. So please don't call me to disturb. Please remember there was a girl that gave you a good time when you're down. Let us stay intouch,OK?see Ya!
初一那个孩子英语不错！
I'm happy to know everyone,and I find fun in chatting. But I'm going to study,so I just have half of a day freedom every week,I really hope to improve my study,and I want to get better than before. So,I'll seldom surf the Internet,and I won't have much time on QQ. But I think I will on QQ when I have some free time,please don't call me to disturb. Please remember there was a girl who hope you to have a good time,with you to during the boring time.Cheer up,everyone who I know. Let us keep in touch,OK? I'll waiting for you when I am free. 让大家见笑了，我才初一，以上文章仅供参考，你要不要都无所谓的。我只当是一篇小练笔了。
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Time is inportant for us。So we must be do anyhing on time。
The first ,we shloudn't go to school be late.The second，we must be keep our words。In my opnio，we can making a plan for this what we can.And we'd better try it for our best.A good habit is useful our do something on time.So that,we must have a good habit .What can we do ?We could make some little papers for aware ourself.It is important how do you treated it.
Living is made up from times.So,let's us do anyhings on time.你读初中？高中？我的作文按初中的要求一般20分打16左右，按高中的要求25分打18左右，毕竟还有语法错误，一般中上程度，你将就点吧.呵呵
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